I Need You Now

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  1. Allison Schuck

    Allison Schuck Active Member
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    Are you for me, am I for you, oh baby, tell me...
    do you hunger for my touch, oh please don't flee
    I want to wrap my arms around you, squeeze you oh so tight
    need your love, my darling, I need it now....tonight!

    I won't wait another moment to see your loving face,
    can't wait another week, to feel your warm embrace.
    I need you now my darling, don't you comprehend?
    Want you to say "I love you",
    .......don't ask me to be "just a friend".

    I don't want to cry, nor will I die, if you want to walk away
    but tonight, when getting on my knees, I will really pray...
    Ask my Lord about my life if there's anything left to save
    And if He says there is my love, I'll know how I'll behave.

    Will look for you just everywhere, then knock upon your door
    I will give you love, my sweet........... like you've never had before.
    Caress your gentle lips with mine, hold you close right here....
    I'll bring you to a moment, that you will hold so dear.....
    Say yes, right now...
    I need your love,
    not tomorrow,
    but today
    If you put a ring upon my finger.........you'll never regret the day!

    © Allison S, Wednesday, June 18,2014, 5:35PM
     
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    i would be really surprised if you told me these poems weren't based on personal experience. They sound very genuine.
     
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  3. Allison Schuck

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    They aren't Jenn. The only one that was is "My Crown". That was based on a dream I had.

    The others were just when I let my imagination run away with me.

    I cannot write a poem unless I "feel" something. I think it has to do with the "mood" I happen to be in at the time.

    A friend asked me to write a poem about her deceased brother. I heard a bit about him, then when the mood struck, I did it. She lost it and a couple years later, she asked me to do it again. I hadn't kept it and I tried to do another one and it just wouldn't come to me for a long time, then I did it, but it was never as good as that first one.
     
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    Thanks for sharing your talent with us, you are very gifted.
     
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  5. Allison Schuck

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    Thank you so much Pat. I don't think of myself as being gifted. I wish I had known I could write a little bit, when I was younger. It has only been in the last 5 years I found out that I can sketch people as well. That is fun.
     
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