A Millionaire

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  1. Maisie Walker

    Maisie Walker Very Well-Known Member
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    I wrote this poem after witnessing this in a small inn that hubby and I had stopped at when on our way to a Classic Car rally some years ago.
    I was SO impressed with the quiet dignity of the elderly gentleman I could not get it out of my mind hence the poem.



    A MILLIONAIRE.

    As I listened to a loud conversation taking place in country inn
    Between four young men discussing a great big lottery win
    One said he would go round the world on a wonderful cruise
    Another mentioned pretty girls and drinking lots of booze.

    The third said the wonders of the world he would go to see
    The fourth one said I will help no one I will spend it all on me.
    An elderly man sat nearby quietly drinking as one loudly said
    "What would you do Granddad? Have hair put on your head?"

    A hush fell over the customers as the sarcasm the old man defied
    When the old chap looked straight at them and very quietly replied
    "I have all my wealth and happiness when I wake up each day
    As I hear the birds all singing and can see the children play

    I have travelled on life's ocean and at times it's been quite rough
    But I had a good woman by my side and to me that was enough.
    The wonders of my world are my sons and my lovely daughter too
    And finding each day can show me something fresh and new

    No amount of money on this earth can buy me my good health
    I have never craved for material things and never wanted wealth,
    I went through a war where lads like you were daily slaughtered
    A bloody war to bring peace but I'm afraid nothing has altered.

    So you see I AM a millionaire I dont need money to spend
    And when your broke just think of me as through life you wend.
    Think of the old man that you derided about his thinning hair
    And I just hope that you too have found someone to really care."

    A silence had fallen over everyone as the old man had his say
    When one of the lads said "Drink up old timer this time I will pay "
    The quiet dignity of the old man had overcome their hurtful jeers
    And a bottle of whiskey was handed to him as they all said 'Cheers'

    "Thanks for opening our eyes to all we thought money could buy
    If we were to spend the lot today we would all finish up saying WHY,
    Asking Why! did we not give a portion to those desperately in need
    For a children's hospital, and the aged, could we not do a good deed?

    Old man you have taught us compassion, respect and much humility
    And your strength of character seems to have been your inner key,
    We will discuss this win of ours to see what would be the best way
    To share our win with others and it will help to make their day.

    We realise and thank you for the sense you have made us see
    That no amount of money can buy happiness or the love of a family.
    We drink to your health and we will remember when we all grow old
    Of the tale of a millionaire whose faith in his family was his pot of gold."

    Copyright © - Maisie Walker 2000 - All rights reserved
     
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    Its a grand piece of work Maisie
     
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    Thanks Patsy.
     
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    I love your poem...and it's so true! :) @Maisie Walker Glad you decided to join us...welcome. :)
     
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    Many thanks Babs.
     
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    Superb Maisie :)
     
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    Excellent!
     
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    Well done!
     
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    I wrote this poem after witnessing this in a small inn that hubby and I had stopped at when on our way to a Classic Car rally some years ago.
    I was SO impressed with the quiet dignity of the elderly gentleman I could not
    get it out of my mind hence the poem.
    I wrote the poem in 2004 but it had happened way back in 1993 when we still had our Ford Classic but it had stuck in my mind and I always said I would write it down some day.

    I am not a lover of fiction and all my poems and my tales are based all true happenings.



    A MILLIONAIRE.

    As I listened to a loud conversation taking place in country inn
    Between four young men discussing a great big lottery win
    One said he would go round the world on a wonderful cruise
    Another mentioned pretty girls and drinking lots of booze.

    The third said the wonders of the world he would go to see
    The fourth one said I will help no one I will spend it all on me.
    An elderly man sat nearby quietly drinking as one loudly said
    "What would you do Granddad? Have hair put on your head?"

    A hush fell over the customers as the sarcasm the old man defied
    When the old chap looked straight at them and very quietly replied
    "I have all my wealth and happiness when I wake up each day
    As I hear the birds all singing and can see the children play

    I have travelled on life's ocean and at times it's been quite rough
    But I had a good woman by my side and to me that was enough.
    The wonders of my world are my sons and my lovely daughter too
    And finding each day can show me something fresh and new

    No amount of money on this earth can buy me my good health
    I have never craved for material things and never wanted wealth,
    I went through a war where lads like you were daily slaughtered
    A bloody war to bring peace but I'm afraid nothing has altered.

    So you see I AM a millionaire I dont need money to spend
    And when your broke just think of me as through life you wend.
    Think of the old man that you derided about his thinning hair
    And I just hope that you too have found someone to really care."

    A silence had fallen over everyone as the old man had his say
    When one of the lads said "Drink up old timer this time I will pay "
    The quiet dignity of the old man had overcome their hurtful jeers
    And a bottle of whiskey was handed to him as they all said 'Cheers'

    "Thanks for opening our eyes to all we thought money could buy
    If we were to spend the lot today we would all finish up saying WHY,
    Asking Why! did we not give a portion to those desperately in need
    For a children's hospital, and the aged, could we not do a good deed?

    Old man you have taught us compassion, respect and much humility
    And your strength of character seems to have been your inner key,
    We will discuss this win of ours to see what would be the best way
    To share our win with others and it will help to make their day.

    We realise and thank you for the sense you have made us see
    That no amount of money can buy happiness or the love of a family.
    We drink to your health and we will remember when we all grow old
    Of the tale of a millionaire whose faith in his family was his pot of gold."

    Written by Maisie Walker in 2004.
     
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    Hello there Maisie - a delight to hear from you again
    Another piece of wonderful writing.
    I am re-reading your book, so good :)
     
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    Beautiful....
     
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    Ditto Holly--Beautiful!
     
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  14. Hal Pollner

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    Millionaires are not so impressive anymore.

    Maybe it's because these days, most of us Seniors have a nest egg or estate valuation that approaches or exceeds that "magical" figure.

    I read that there are over 11 million millionaires in the USA today, or roughly 3% of the population.

    Hal
     
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